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Brokenangel
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  posted on 05-11-2010 12:02 pm
here u guys could post any poems u feel like posting or comment other peoples poems they can be cute and chipper or dark and filled with tears if u know wat i am saying and u all are feeling me then go crazy posting here

ex of my poems

i cought his breath on my neck, his jaw locked fighting the urge of holding me closer, he felt my pulse on his flesh i tensed up and looked up at the moon our only witness of our forbidden tabboo. he bit into the forbidden fruit and i held in my pleasure as i felt him drink in the crimson life of mine.

im traped in ur dream world would u ever let me out


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posted on 05-19-2010 11:55 am
i lay under the broken chains of this bed, i never saw it coming, i saw the shame in his eyes the hurt on my flesh and the pain on his fist. i stay still under the darkness u slowly walk away i see the tiny scarlet glimpse of remorse. my lips tremble and say i love u. u smile at my weakness and leave me alone in my wasteland

im traped in ur dream world would u ever let me out


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posted on 05-19-2010 12:48 pm


Dedicated to Darkness and Princess: (just giving u a poem to reflect) hope this works

anger had been set up

but its a feeling of being mess up

forgiveness may not be given now 

but lies beyond a heart is a soft gentle echo that u can forgive her somehow

yes, it hurts and the wounds cant be replaced

But deep in ur stoned heart the scars can be erase

sorry can be the hardest word

but it is the only word u should never fail to spoke

cause what cures an aching heart 

Is the love and friendship to both of u

that always has been a part

its never too late because u can always go to a brand new start






—BloodyLai—


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posted on 05-21-2010 01:39 pm
theres an obssesion between u and i but i can never figuere u out.

i toss and turn late at night when the moon rises and sees my pain.

i try to not think about us yet all i can think about is all we had.

i have never felt worthy of ur love and yet u desire me with no regret.

i want to show u  how much i care yet i am scared that u would go away.

i am scared that u will vanish from my arms if i held onto u just once in this life.

im traped in ur dream world would u ever let me out


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posted on 05-24-2010 10:01 am
blood purs down the crack on wat was once called flesh.

there is a burning pleasure on the skin of those who seek more than wat they see on the path of darkness in front.

pure blood all so crimson with the agony of suffering, in the world claimed into one soul

no one knows the sacrifice of this one young soul so pure and inocent wit the last tears of the world

im traped in ur dream world would u ever let me out


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posted on 05-26-2010 12:05 pm
i sit alone in the darkness of this room and hold in my hands the ashes u left behind.

i look around i'm alone once again no one who cares no one to notice me in the dark.

theres nothing left but the tears and crimson pain on the floor as it spills from its goblet.

an empty place left behind just for u

im traped in ur dream world would u ever let me out


Vampirebytch
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posted on 05-26-2010 05:46 pm
i wish heaven

i had a soul,so i could hear your voice again

i thought of you today, but thts nothing new

i thought about you yesterday and the day before tht too..

i think of you in silence

i often speak your name

all i have are memeries and a picture in a frame

Love Yours Truely KikiBear


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posted on 05-26-2010 06:00 pm
god holds me tight when im frightful he confurts me when things go bad he cheers me up when im sad he punshes me when im bad.

Paige Amaria Uchiha,roses or red voilets or blue hurt my friends and family your dead enough said.


Brokenangel
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posted on 05-27-2010 09:39 am
aww vampire i love ur poem

im traped in ur dream world would u ever let me out


DeadAngel666
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posted on 05-27-2010 10:42 am
Never Again

You said you loved me, you said you'd never leave

You told me I was your only, you told me you believed,

in everything we were together but now I'm taking heed

To your lying lips and deceitful tongue,

when you said I was your only one.

So now I'm left alone and in the dark,

wondering why she broke my heart,

You lied and you cheated, playing me for a fool,

saying I'm your mistress of love,

but now I know you were full of bull.

I will never love you, not ever again,

because the hurt you caused will never bend,

which is why I tell you never again!

This is the very first poem that I ever wrote and its dedicated to my ex girlfriend who was also my first love.
Brokenangel
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posted on 05-27-2010 11:34 am
aww dead i like ur poem and u shouldnt hate her even if she hurt u deeply u should forgive her and move on in ur life i know its hard to do but if not there will always be a deep wound of pain in ur beautiful soul and heart

im traped in ur dream world would u ever let me out


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posted on 05-30-2010 08:52 pm
love is a special word i don't use often

and i thought i never would use it, especial since i've only known you a short time

but i can honestly say with full confients i truely love you

and im falling for you as hard as i possibe can

not for your mind, body, nor for your deep blue eyes but for the way you make me feel inside

were you can't breathe like death is coming and you are the only person i think about all day and night

now you know how i truely feel about you

the only question tht lays unanswered is do you feel the same way about me.....

 

i wrote this poem for my dead ex and forgot to give it to hope you guys like this... it explains how i truely feels about him...

i love your poems broken angel and your's as well death and you to princess

Love Yours Truely KikiBear


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posted on 05-30-2010 10:00 pm
you havnt called or beconed me near so why is this dear do you not love me or am not good did you call im worried dear with fear is not true is or love not real or was this a pawn in sceme so you could catch in your dream this is to my boyfriend hunter.

Paige Amaria Uchiha,roses or red voilets or blue hurt my friends and family your dead enough said.


Brokenangel
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posted on 05-31-2010 10:00 am
awwwww vampire thank u and ur poem was lovely i'm glad u posted this poem here keep up the great work

im traped in ur dream world would u ever let me out


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posted on 05-31-2010 10:47 am
MAY I NEVER STEAL,LIE,OR CHEAT..BUT IF I MUST STEAL,I WILL STEAL AWAY YOUR SORROWS,...AND IF I MUST LIE,I WILL LIE BESIDE YOU EVERYNIGHT,...AND IF I MUST CHEAT,I WILL CHEAT DEATH SO YOU WILL NEVER BE ALONE

I WRITE THIS TO MY WIFE TO BE...I LOVE HER DEARLY NICE THREAD LADYS  
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