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  posted on 02-13-2011 03:54 pm
i try my best i try to do right will i be understood r is tht to hard to do acept me i acept u how hard could that be i try to impress u but i guess im below what will it take to prove im worthy to be with u again i defend i pray and lay and listen for advise all i hear is a solom whisper im here but y cant i see u a solom whispers pray

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posted on 02-13-2011 03:59 pm
i try my best will i ever be like the rest i lay awake in the mist wonder who is right and who is wrong and were do i belong,am i born in a no mans land will they ever understand and be my friend will light and dark ever be hand in hand and walk the same land in peace with out the endless beast of terror and night

Paige Amaria Uchiha,roses or red voilets or blue hurt my friends and family your dead enough said.


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posted on 02-13-2011 04:20 pm
those really cool!!!!! smile

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posted on 02-13-2011 04:24 pm
How about this 

The silence isn't so bad til i look at my hands and feel sad, cuz the spaces between my fingers are right were yours fit perfectly

how was that????

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posted on 02-13-2011 04:25 pm
thts gd

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posted on 02-13-2011 04:30 pm
really???? how about this one?

But now I  know the things I know, And do the things I do, And if you do not like me so, To hell, my love, with you.

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posted on 02-13-2011 04:37 pm
good,my love for u is as strong as the wind when were togather we r like a destined few i swear my love for u is true

Paige Amaria Uchiha,roses or red voilets or blue hurt my friends and family your dead enough said.


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posted on 02-13-2011 04:48 pm
Shop til u drop, then find a hot guy to help you up

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posted on 02-13-2011 04:57 pm
shop to u drop come on now dont u stop do a shin make u look like earl lynn

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posted on 02-13-2011 06:12 pm
did you make that up? cuz its pretty good wink
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posted on 02-13-2011 06:36 pm
So many times I asked myself

What for I was born into this world and grew up

And why the clouds float and rains pour

You shouldn't expect anything for yourself in this world

I would fly up to the clouds but I have no wings

That starlight lures me from afar

But it's hard to reach the star though the goal is close at hand

And I don't know if I 'll have enough strength for the throw

How many paths do I have to go by?

How many peaks should I conquer to find my own self?

How long should I keep falling from the cliff?

How many times should I start from the beginning and is there any sense to it?

I'll wait just a little bit more

And then will get ready for my journey

Towards the Dream and Hope
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posted on 02-13-2011 06:38 pm
yes i made them up lol

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posted on 02-13-2011 07:48 pm
I liked that one Andrei i also like ur 2 Princess and the fact u made them up makes em' better!!!!!! smile

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posted on 02-13-2011 07:52 pm
lol thxs

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posted on 02-13-2011 07:53 pm
LOL ur welcome!!!!! rasberry

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