sarafane
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posted on 5-27-2006 at 12:55 AM
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physic vampire story
hi i'm fairly new to this, i'm trying to write a story about a transexual physic vampire and i need some help i have my main character but no plot
to tell my story, i have tried several times to write a story but with no success so if anyone could help come up wih an idea i would be greatful i
hope no one minds my useing the idea of a transexual vampire i dont think its been done before
many thanks
sarafane
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JS-man
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posted on 5-27-2006 at 02:46 AM
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well Sara, on behalf of all of us here. Let me be the first to say "welcome", and you have come to the right place. You could fill a library with
the weird stuff that flies around these forums. So, now that, that is out of the way lets get down to buisness. This is just my opinion so feel free
to correct my logic, or point out a bad idea.......... Well, I think its better for the lead character of any story to first have a good opposition.
for example, if your vampire has a fairly easy time slaughtering countless towns full of old folks, defenseless children, and armies of ill-equiped
back-woods farmers. The story might not go the distance, cause after a while (believe it or not) it will get boring. So, the proper setting for any
transexual psychic vampire would contain a challenge that would be worth his\her or her\his........ ....... time. So in my opinion I would have........your hero face an ancient clan of vampires. A clan that
specializes in a certain power: strength, telekinsis, form change, or even a clan that specializes in psychic abilities. Let your character seek
revenge for his\her exile. But whatever you choose let the elder vampire beat your character within an inche of his\her life before they even lay a
finger on the elder.......well thats all for now hope I helped 
"The next best thing to killing a person, is scaring the living [Censored] out of them!"
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Raven
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posted on 5-30-2006 at 12:52 AM
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Wow, that would be a really good book........ But honestly I have nothing on my mind to help you. I'm taking a break from my book....... One fairly
long book. But sorry i have nothing right now.
92% of teens, have moved on to rap music. If you are part of the 8% who still rock out every day, post this somewhere.
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